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Day 04 - Prompt 18 - Play The Part

Prompt 18 - Play The Part (S&A, Geoffrey, 345 words, PG13) for [info]ds_aprilfools Day the 4th



Geoffrey realizes belatedly that this is a discharge hearing. These lovely people, sitting at the long table in front of him, will decide if he's still a danger to himself and others or if he's sane enough to be released out into the world again, like rehabilitated wildlife. That is the real reason for their carefully worded questions and unnaturally hearty smiles.

He sits up straighter in his chair, running a hand through his unruly hair and tries out his best impression of a sane person. He smiles, careful not to show any teeth, meeting the eyes of each committee member, all the while thinking loudly to himself, I am not crazy, I am not crazy. He's an actor, a good one at that. He should be able to pull this off.

It was time to play the part of a sane man, one that hadn't shattered into a million broken pieces. Time to be the normal Geoffrey, instead of the man who sometimes found himself huddled in a corner talking to his imaginary friends.

Geoffrey sighs and tries to look attentive as the committee discusses his case among themselves in whispers.

He and his counselor had talked about many things since his unexpected arrival here, like his artistic tendency towards melodrama and his foolish leap into Ophelia's grave. The counselor, Mr. Parameswariah, had mumbled something about wish-fulfillment and Oedipus complexes before prescribing a course of sedatives and anti-psychotics.

Geoffrey rather liked his pills. They were colorful and pleasingly round.

He wasn't sure if he was ready to deal with the real world, but he knew he was tired of his life here at the institution. Mr. Parameswariah was positive that it was time for Geoffrey to move on.

Maybe he was right. Geoffrey could find a small theater somewhere and spend the rest of his life directing mediocre, part-time actors in endless, watered down versions of Romeo and Juliet, maybe the occasional Othello or King Lear thrown in to keep him from going insane. Again.



My prompt table.

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[info]love_jackianto

April 5 2008, 06:26:32 UTC 4 years ago

Great snippet.

'Geoffrey rather liked his pills. They were colorful and pleasingly round.'
I really like that line.

[info]akamine_chan

April 7 2008, 04:07:21 UTC 4 years ago

Me, too. It makes me giggle every time I see it.

*pets Geoffrey*

Sucks to be crazy, I bet.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting!

[info]capt_spork

April 5 2008, 12:03:30 UTC 4 years ago

Geoffrey rather liked his pills. They were colorful and pleasingly round.

*snigger* I can see Geoffrey making the decision on the goodness of his pills based on this.

I really like this. The last paragraph is kinda heartbreaking in a way.

[info]akamine_chan

April 7 2008, 04:08:59 UTC 4 years ago

Well, when you're being doped up on anti-psychotics and sedatives...

And Geoffrey is heartbreaking in many ways. So brilliant, yet so troubled. Ah, the price of genius.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked this...

[info]dugrival

April 5 2008, 19:07:25 UTC 4 years ago

Look! A perfect description of Geoffrey's patented saneface! *loves*

You realize you're going to have to write lots more S&A now, because you've got a damn good Geoffrey voice going on here. So there.

[info]akamine_chan

April 7 2008, 04:10:02 UTC 4 years ago

Oh, yeah, 'cause I don't have enough on my plate already. *g*

I'll make you a trade, S&A fic for cabbage-sequels...

[info]dugrival

April 8 2008, 01:12:12 UTC 4 years ago

Heh, sneaky, you! Tell me what the hell should happen in the cabbage-sequel, and I'll see what I can do.

[info]spuffyduds

April 8 2008, 00:09:20 UTC 4 years ago

The "impression of a sane person" is gently heartbreaking.

[info]akamine_chan

April 13 2008, 07:22:14 UTC 4 years ago

Thanks, spuff. Geoffrey is an artisté and sanity is just a lifestyle choice.

[info]zabira

April 10 2008, 04:22:00 UTC 4 years ago

oh, geoffrey!!! i love him telling himself he's an actor, he can act sane. that's just so, aw, poignant.

also? this sentence scans beautifully, and is furthermore hilari-sad:

Geoffrey rather liked his pills. They were colorful and pleasingly round.

[info]akamine_chan

April 13 2008, 07:23:01 UTC 4 years ago

I really liked that line. I don't know where it came from but I really liked it. I'm glad you enjoyed this, Z. *hug*

[info]keerawa

May 7 2008, 04:44:11 UTC 4 years ago

Excellent piece!

These lovely people, sitting at the long table in front of him, will decide if he's still a danger to himself and others or if he's sane enough to be released out into the world again, like rehabilitated wildlife. Perfect Geoffrey voice there, just slightly off-kilter. I love the line about his pills.

I'm also amused by how frequently, out in the real world, Geoffrey lets his impression of sanity fall by the wayside.

[info]akamine_chan

May 7 2008, 11:58:04 UTC 4 years ago

*pets him*

Thanks, keerawa.

I'm also amused by how frequently, out in the real world, Geoffrey lets his impression of sanity fall by the wayside.

I think that's 'cause we don't require our actors to be sane. And the line about the pills? That was one of my favorite things I've written. *g*

[info]ismenetruth

May 7 2008, 08:21:07 UTC 4 years ago

Oh, Geoffrey. You've got his voice just exactly right, off-kilter and casually brilliant and lovely.

[info]akamine_chan

May 7 2008, 12:05:34 UTC 4 years ago

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[info]ulkis

May 7 2008, 16:06:50 UTC 4 years ago

Good Geoffrey POV. "Pleasingly round" - loved that line.

[info]akamine_chan

May 8 2008, 13:07:41 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you.

[info]_scally

May 25 2008, 11:56:40 UTC 4 years ago

Very moving, thank you.

Do you mind if I translate this piece for my Russian friend who loves Geoffrey very much?

[info]akamine_chan

May 26 2008, 05:52:58 UTC 4 years ago

Thanks, and no, I don't mind if you translate it into Russian.

I love Geoffrey a lot, too. *g*

[info]luzula

October 21 2009, 15:58:22 UTC 2 years ago

Huh, I missed this earlier. I love the bit about rehabilitated wildlife for some reason. And, like everyone else, the line about the pills.

[info]akamine_chan

October 22 2009, 02:08:07 UTC 2 years ago

The line about the pills was inspired. I just wish I could be inspired like that on demand...

Glad you liked, Luz.
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